New Writing

156.1: Siel Ju:: Rebound & Like It’s 1984 & Stilettos
14 October 2013
Memorable art seems impervious to our faulty, though necessary, distinctions of what constitutes high and low culture. Shakespeare then was considered a baser art form than it is now. The classic stories of Dashiell Hammett were then considered leisure reading; now, they are timeless standards of hard-boiled detective fiction that some of our greatest films in America have aspired to (e.g. Chinatown, Fargo, or Miller’s Crossing). Siel Ju’s poems also seem impervious to this odd and illogical distinction of high and low culture. These poems are formally jarring and require the eye and ear of reader to come into synch with its syntax and lines. Like Shakespeare’s double-entendres, they require a second guess, or a second regard, to see the way the poem functions vertically and horizontally. Ju’s works seem to take strongly into consideration the paradoxical relationship between the poet’s world and reality.
155.1: Deborah Bernhardt:: Driftology [Episode Two] & Driftology [Episode Three] & Driftology [Episode Four]
7 October 2013
The term driftology refers to the study of drift patterns of flotsam. In these three poems/episodes, Deborah Bernhardt creates a framework of attention in which she chronicles the flotsam that passes by her perspective. This is an attention not of a minute object being rigorously detailed but rather of the ephemeral bits of media, information, advertising, and tangential thoughts that make up our daily experiences. Glimpses of television shows flit by with their momentary feelings of importance, and are likewise nearly immediately forgotten as Twin Peaks gives way to The Sopranos gives way to "Local Woman Tamps Down Tone." And we drift on to the next poem, the next episode, the next moment. As much as I want to think of the words, the lines, the information in these poems as the flotsam, I keep coming to the realization that the drifting I'm studying is my own—my own inability to cease to drift, to find a stable mooring. And these poems tell me that this is not a bad thing, that instead of fearing the drift, I should embrace it: "and my mind is feathers, and then my mind is strewn, and then collected, / and once it is, the particular pleasure is the dodging tool atop, bloodletting // a funnel of light, waving me / lighter than myself."
154.1: Max Jacob:: Poem in a Style that Isn’t Mine & Poem in a Style that Isn’t Mine & Marcel Proust
30 September 2013
In Marcel Proust's Swann's Way, the Narrator remembers preparing his aunt's tisane, or herbal tea, when she feels unwell. The tisane package comes from a local chemist and contains dried lime-blossoms. These blossoms must be infused with boiling water to flavor the tea. This week, Andy Nicholson returns to TOA with a selection of translations from Max Jacob's The Dice Cup written in styles not his own, including the style of Marcel Proust. Like the tisane episode, Jacob encounters a dessicated trellis of language—the dried pages of well-known Francophone authors—and infuses this trellis with his own language and humor. Rimbaud, Baudelaire, Marcel Proust—each of these authors inspire a particular poem in this selection and each could be said to traverse the rhetorical limits of poetry and prose: Rimbaud and Baudelaire are as famous for their prose poems as they are their lineated poems; Proust's unparalleled imagery is nothing short of poetry in prose. Readers will delight in the allusiveness of "For you, Rimbaud," the humorous and profound dialogue of "For you, Baudelaire," and the sudden imagistic effect of "Marcel Proust." Each of these entries writes to the past knowing what Proust knew: that with a little water, the dried lime-blossoms will flower again.
153.1: Barbara Claire Freeman:: from #343
23 September 2013
Sometimes walking alone at night, I get spooked. I hold my keys like jagged blades between my knuckles. In this way I change my shadow. I penetrate the night with a little threat to keep away and before I know it, I’m home safe. As I read Barbara Claire Freeman’s writing this week, I’m reminded of this feeling. I’m captivated not by the characters but by the shadows they cast on a starless black night. “She,” “he,” “someone,” “we” never completely manifest, though their intentions to impose on the night cause the landscape to shift. The row of pine trees must be kept on the right of an undefined “we,” reminding the reader how we orient ourselves in space by defining our surroundings with relation to our own body’s axis. The smoke hovering far away in this poem creates an image for “you alone,” but despite this, the hill that no one recalls persists. The danger extends itself into the distance in signs beyond the road. This poem neither crosses nor creates a distance—rather it seeks to describe what it’s like for a distance (and a length of time) to exist. And that simply can’t happen without the shadow of a character to move across a field, near a stream, through time. Could it be your shadow? At the end, do you feel closer or further from home?
152.1: Francisco Guevara:: Jus ad bellum, to awe
16 September 2013
I was grading papers this morning before I began writing this introduction, and as I moved through freshman comp narratives, I was struck by how violent the typo is and how sometimes the wrong word can create the most wonderful meanings—how the error is a break. In the long poem here we have something totally different, an immensely competent practitioner of craft, but because of the context of this morning I couldn’t help from drawing parallels. Errata: the errors and the list of corrections—corrections to be made and to be noted. From "to wander." I wonder this week how these poems of Francisco Guevara wander, their wonder, how they were meant to be attempts at correction; who Alice is/was, and if her globe can be mended. I am drawn to Guevera’s work because of his attention to sound, his phrasing. I enter the poems to be lost in that—“a river’s susurrus there in summers where…” and to come up some time later to ask what ground has been covered, what movements I the reader have made, and what has been lost. Here there is loss. A grieving. Remorse. All that, but no error.
151.1: Bill Rector:: Macbeth & Lady Macbeth & Desdemona & Richard III
9 September 2013
While a quartet of sonnets in the dramatic monologues of various Shakespearean characters might seem like a very traditional feature to come across in contemporary poetry, Bill Rector’s poems this week are fragmentary, strange, and wildly inventive. “Lady Macbeth” comes to us in a short, piecemeal declaration that its speaker constructs to convince the weird ladies to give her an old, sad banana. We don’t see the grand enabler of Macbeth step into her sinister and memorable role of the play. Instead, Rector’s speaker shows us how her necessities of motherhood depend upon the ability to bargain for and ingest rot. Similarly, the beautiful Desdemona from Othello is not the blameless victim (you’ll notice I depart here from Auden’s interpretation of her) of the Venetian tragedy; rather, here she becomes a co-conspirator and gives her husband instruction of his own undoing:
150.1: Elizabeth Robinson:: On Rage & On the Difference between Animal and Creature & On Bathing
2 September 2013
"Rage is always past tense" begins Elizabeth Robinson's first of three odes below. The ode itself is rooted in the past tense (like all poems are). The subject is considered at a time in the past and the writing occurs at another time in the past. The magic of the ode, like when we talk about someone's rage, is to at least momentarily create a new present-ness for the subject: "Cheerful music plays in the background. / As though it were playing right now." Think of the power of the philosophical questions raised in Keats' "Ode on a Grecian Urn." Robinson's odes are aware of and play with this parallel timeline. She confronts the poet's position and knowledge of that position in writing the ode: "They understood that the very act of bathing was a distance / and the body / moved to it, / was doubled." What comes out of these meta-odes is an exploration of the subject, asking us to examine what it means to consider a subject and how the act of choosing to consider it affects it, changes it, overdetermines our thoughts of it. The ode as an act of looking at an electron, causing it to change from wave to particle. As we read Robinson's odes to rage, animality, and bathing, we realize along with her that the more we look at a subject, the less certain we can be of what it really is: "Familiar, recall the odor of the other."
149.1: Sarah Suzor:: Problems & A Good Example & The Perfect Example
1 July 2013
If I had to choose a poet to watch bad reality television with, it would be Sarah Suzor. It’s not because her new book-length work “The Prettiest Girl in the World” is shallow—though it considers superficiality as a theme—or pop-culturally obsessed—though song lyrics and fashion play their parts therein. It’s that Suzor can take the most trivial, minute concerns of the everyday and spin them into wildly philosophical musings. Bad lines from a bad love song morph into reflections on authenticity in relationships. An astonishingly pretty girl becomes a funhouse mirror, reflecting and distorting all of us: our flaws, desperation, gratitude and desires.
148.1: Conchitina Cruz:: Here & Letter to the Stranger
24 June 2013
In my friend Andy’s apartment, I read a poem. In Chicago, I drink a Singapore Sling. This has little to do with Chicago or with Singapore, except that Andy is in Chicago, I’m in Chicago, and Andy is a tiki drink aficionado. Such is the way in which place is revealed and considered in Conchitina Cruz’s “Here.” Indeed, for a poem in which travel is a given, the poet gives priority to the self and its actions rather than the exotic destinations (which, to be fair, are mingled with pedestrian locales like the coffee shop and the elevator). The self is the subject of each sentence; the location is mere object and occasional stage direction. In this way, Cruz eschews the rote travel narrative that rises out of privilege—the Eat-Pray-Love-and-You-Can-Too narrative.
147.1: John Fry:: soul, paraphrased & there are four angels standing at the four corners of the earth & every time you wish the sky was something happening to your heart
17 June 2013
To call this week's selection by John Fry a selection of prayers wouldn't be quite right. Certainly, the speaker in these lyrics longs for something, just as the waterwheel longs for the river's song in "soul, paraphrased." But these lyrics are insistent, even assertive. They have discovered an absence (in the speaker, in the world) and will not let go of that discovery. Like Jacob wrestling the angel, Fry's speaker will not leave until he has received a blessing.